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	<title>Comments on: 古池や</title>
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		<title>By: Sean Kinsell</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sean Kinsell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Jan 2008 05:19:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeah, I don&#039;t think Jeff&#039;s going to be back to posting all that frequently, but he&#039;s hilarious.  Probably NSFW if you&#039;re office is big on preserving leftist pieties, though.  : )
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, I don&#8217;t think Jeff&#8217;s going to be back to posting all that frequently, but he&#8217;s hilarious.  Probably NSFW if you&#8217;re office is big on preserving leftist pieties, though.  : )</p>
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		<title>By: Marzo</title>
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		<dc:creator>Marzo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jan 2008 15:00:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&gt;&lt;i&gt;and then go on to write about a Ukrainian drag queen&lt;/i&gt;&lt;BR /&gt;&lt;BR /&gt;And a P.S. about Alaska &amp;Fangoria, too!  I must read Beatiful Atrocities more.  (Well, I must read Beatiful Atrocities, period).
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>><i>and then go on to write about a Ukrainian drag queen</i></p>
<p>And a P.S. about Alaska &amp;Fangoria, too!  I must read Beatiful Atrocities more.  (Well, I must read Beatiful Atrocities, period).</p>
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		<title>By: Sean Kinsell</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sean Kinsell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jan 2008 14:46:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m not entirely sure about that first part.  Modern Japanese prose is a lot more compact, but classical Japanese had quite a few long-ass inflections and affixes.  It seems to me to even out reasonably well in terms of ideas per syllable.  And yeah, the haiku&#039;s gotten trite...but you see hackneyed paintings, novels, and plays, too.  I think the problem with the haiku is that people learn to think of it as both (1) like, super-deep, man and (2) quick and easy.  The temptation to try for both goods at once is just too strong.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not entirely sure about that first part.  Modern Japanese prose is a lot more compact, but classical Japanese had quite a few long-ass inflections and affixes.  It seems to me to even out reasonably well in terms of ideas per syllable.  And yeah, the haiku&#8217;s gotten trite&#8230;but you see hackneyed paintings, novels, and plays, too.  I think the problem with the haiku is that people learn to think of it as both (1) like, super-deep, man and (2) quick and easy.  The temptation to try for both goods at once is just too strong.</p>
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		<title>By: Zak</title>
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		<dc:creator>Zak</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Jan 2008 13:49:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>ESPECIALLY because Japanese is a much more compact language than English is, so you can squeeze a lot more meaning into 17 syllables. If you are going to copy what is almost always a trite form to begin with (sorry Sean!), you should at least double the amount of syllables in English to give it the latitude you have in Japanese.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>ESPECIALLY because Japanese is a much more compact language than English is, so you can squeeze a lot more meaning into 17 syllables. If you are going to copy what is almost always a trite form to begin with (sorry Sean!), you should at least double the amount of syllables in English to give it the latitude you have in Japanese.</p>
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